Is William here or not ?

Jack you have saved somebodys  life, Mum I have saved Williams life he was very inauspicious and frail

I am proud of myself I have have set myself a dignity !

i was in the car driving home, and then i had a vision of Eyam but why, then william was sick on mum mum again, his sick smelt like my old grandpa.

William william wake up ! Jack shouted repeatadly, Your having a bad dream, Jack said obnoxiously.

Jack jack I feel parched, So do i but i"m not maoning am i, i felt saturated hunger and thirst, william what are you doing? what are you doing will?

I founf myself punching a wall, i found myself plunging towards my old room i opened the old battered door. There it was the ancient cradle untouched and in harmoney in the right-hand croner.

HHHHHHHH jack what happended to my cradle.Once so cunning and lively now so uglt and disturded it had a huge gash in it.I twisted and turned the acorn, i was then in a strange peculiar place were there were rows of thatch roofs. The bewitching smell of disgusting rotten eggs it was coming from the right-hand side of me, and then i saw the old ladys tear-smeared face it was horrifying.

It was scaring the life out of me, was i ? it was my dream iii think but that"s the question. My body was filling up with fear constantly like a mad scientist filling up a jar with a strange liquid/goo!

I was dragged out of the strange repugnant place (strange palce never before seen). It was too fast. The darkness. i"m stuck thats what it is, my essence still has work to do on this place but i dont have a chance.i have to go back but how ? William what are you doing?

                            What Happended ?

                                                  The end

amimee-lea and hannah wroted this for you to see as a short story....look for eyam..he cant be far away.